Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Journal 47: Diamante Poem

Think of a subject for your poem. Start with a noun (a person, place, thing, or idea). Then think of something that contrasts with it or is opposite to it. Once you have these two parts, you are ready to write a diamante poem. The poem is called diamante because it is shaped like a diamond. The lines are arranged like this:
1. One word (your subject)
2. Two words (adjectives that describe line 1)
3. Three words (action verbs related to line 1)
4. Four words (nouns: first two relate to line 1, second two relate to line 7)
5. Three words (action verbs related to line 7)
6. Two words (adjectives that describe line 7)
7. One word (the word that contrasts with your subject)
Write at least three diamante poems (this is a bargain—only 48 words instead of 200!).


LIGHT VS DARK
Light :)
Bright, Good
Warming, Glowing, Shining
Heat, Hope, Horror, Hatred  
Threatening, Lurking, Obscuring
Menace, Evil
Dark :(

SNEAKERS VS HIGH HEELS
Sneakers :)
Comfy, Cute
Walking, Running, Jump
Sports, Shoes, Pain, "The Plastics"
Limiting, Numbing, Hobbling
Scary, Stupid
High Heels :(

ME VS MY SISTER
Me :)
Awesome, Smart
Chat, Read, Play Sports
Jeans, T-shirts, Dresses, Tiaras
Scream, Giggle, Show off
Girly-girl, Not Awesome
My Sister :(

3 comments:

  1. Janet,

    Good job on the poems!

    -M. McCool

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  2. Haha~ i like the one that you wrote about sneakers and high heels~!! ;)

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    1. Dubby,

      I'll give you points for this one because it was before I put out the rules. Future comments need to be longer (at least 25 words).

      -M. McCool

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